TOASTT Graphic Organizer
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The winter woods are lonely
Dark and cold and void of life
The winter woods are lonely
Silence you could cut with knives
Animals are nesting
In beds below the earth
Trees have long since lost their leaves
Awaiting the rebirth
Rushing rivers freeze right through
Their surfaces like metal
The sky is bare, the last bird flew
No flowers have a petal
The winter woods are lonely
They sleep the months away
The winter woods are lonely
But never here to stay
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Step 1: Title
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“The Winter Woods”
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From the title of my poem, you know it is going to be about winter woods.
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Step 2: Own Words
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This is a descriptive poem because it describes a forest during the winter.
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Stanza 1: The first stanza gives you the image of a dark, cold, dead forest in the winter
Stanza 2: The second stanza tells you about the animals and the threes that are hibernating through the cold months
Stanza 3: More description about the first
Stanza 4: Repetition of the first stanza, says how the winter woods are never here to stay
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Step 3: Analyze Poetic Devices
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Imagery: Uses imagery to give the reader a detailed picture of the woods during winder
Repetition: “The winter woods are lonely”
Simile: “Rushing rivers freeze right through / their surfaces like metal”
Personification: “The winter woods are lonely / they sleep the months away”
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I use imagery to create a bleak picture of the woods during winter.
The rhyme scheme is regular (ABAB, ABCB, ABAB) and allows the reader to create a rhythm in their head as they read.
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Step 4: Shifts
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The whole poem is written through the voice of an outside narrator — no “I” or “you”
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The poem is not meant to relate to humans so no “I”s or “you”s are used, just “the woods”
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Step 5: Tone
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Negative Connotation: lonely, dark, cold, bare,
Positive Connotation: nesting, rebirth, “never here to stay”
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More words in the poem have a negative connotation, so that gives it a more bleak feeling. The positive words are in opposition with the negative.
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Step 6: Theme
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Tone: Somber
Mood: Bleak
Imagery: Strong, descriptive
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No matter how bleak or dark things may seem, even the coldest winters blossom into beautiful springs.
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Summative Analysis: I used imagery in my poem to give the reader a detailed picture of the winter woods as they read. I also used other poetic devices like simile - “Rushing rivers freeze right through / their surfaces like metal” and personification - “The winter woods are lonely / they sleep the months away” to add meaning to the poem. The tone and mood are both quite dark and bleak, but in the last stanza where it says “but never here to stay” ends it on a positive note. This implies that even the darkest, bleakest moments of life will eventually fade away and bloom into something beautiful like the forest will do in springtime.
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